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The Dog at the Door

For a prompt to write about a dog who waits at the door. Inspired by Nacho, my friend's rescue dog.

By Tina D. LopezPublished 5 months ago • 1 min read
The Dog at the Door
Photo by Rebecca Campbell on Unsplash

The house has learned his footsteps now,

the soft plop of paws on plush carpet,

the way he circles twice before settling

like he is unsure he deserves rest.

They call him by a new name

that he forgets to answer to,

so it lingers in the air, waiting.

He eats when the bowl appears,

drinks when the water is freshened,

lets kindness brush the soot from his memory

without quite believing in clean things yet.

The firefighter who carried him out

smelled of smoke and endings.

Hands that had pulled him from fire

set him down in a yard that did not burn.

The dog remembers the heat.

Not as injury, not as pain,

but as a world that once had a center,

a voice, a shape, his human,

who stood at the middle of everything

and said “stay,” told him he was a “good boy.”

Now he waits at a different door.

This one opens often. Easily.

It swings wide for groceries, for mail, for neighbors.

It never opens the way he expects it to.

He watches it anyway.

In his old life, a door meant return.

In the language of dogs,

absence is waiting that hasn’t ended.

At night he sleeps near the threshold,

as if nearness could reverse fate,

as if the floor might remember footsteps

that have already been erased elsewhere.

They love him here.

Soft voices. Full bowls. Gentle hands.

A house full of warmth and extra treats.

Still, when the door shifts in its frame

he lifts his head quickly,

hope striking like a match that won’t catch.

And for a moment, every time,

he is sure she has come back for him.

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Tina D. Lopez

I’m just a human trying to make it in this world. I write about heartbreak, loneliness, longing, anger, family—all the things I can’t seem to leave alone. Everything I write is about me, even when it’s about someone else.

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    Written by Tina D. Lopez