The Dog at the Door
For a prompt to write about a dog who waits at the door. Inspired by Nacho, my friend's rescue dog.
The house has learned his footsteps now,
the soft plop of paws on plush carpet,
the way he circles twice before settling
like he is unsure he deserves rest.
They call him by a new name
that he forgets to answer to,
so it lingers in the air, waiting.
He eats when the bowl appears,
drinks when the water is freshened,
lets kindness brush the soot from his memory
without quite believing in clean things yet.
The firefighter who carried him out
smelled of smoke and endings.
Hands that had pulled him from fire
set him down in a yard that did not burn.
The dog remembers the heat.
Not as injury, not as pain,
but as a world that once had a center,
a voice, a shape, his human,
who stood at the middle of everything
and said “stay,” told him he was a “good boy.”
Now he waits at a different door.
This one opens often. Easily.
It swings wide for groceries, for mail, for neighbors.
It never opens the way he expects it to.
He watches it anyway.
In his old life, a door meant return.
In the language of dogs,
absence is waiting that hasn’t ended.
At night he sleeps near the threshold,
as if nearness could reverse fate,
as if the floor might remember footsteps
that have already been erased elsewhere.
They love him here.
Soft voices. Full bowls. Gentle hands.
A house full of warmth and extra treats.
Still, when the door shifts in its frame
he lifts his head quickly,
hope striking like a match that won’t catch.
And for a moment, every time,
he is sure she has come back for him.
About the Creator
Tina D. Lopez
I’m just a human trying to make it in this world. I write about heartbreak, loneliness, longing, anger, family—all the things I can’t seem to leave alone. Everything I write is about me, even when it’s about someone else.
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