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The Dentest

A demon in disguise

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published about a year ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Dentest

He never smiled, not with lips

just eyes that blinked like broken bits

of mirror left in alley dust

a man you’d pass, but never trust.

No plaque outside, no waiting chair

just creaking stairs and colder air

a bell that rang with no reply

a shadow shifting near the sky.

He worked alone, he took no fees

no drills, no lights, no niceties

and if you dared to knock that door

you left with fewer teeth than before.

His fingers smelled of copper rot

he’d hum and mutter, pick and plot

a child’s loose tooth, a widow’s crown

he’d mark the date and write it down.

They said he carved each root and fang

with names and dreams and where they sang

he’d polish pain, he’d count your lies

then slip your molars in a vice.

His walls were lined with jars and grins

from wedding days and childhood sins

from those who thought it safe to sleep

from those who thought they had secrets to keep.

No grave was deep enough to stall

his need to catalogue them all

a thief of bone, a prince of pulp

his breath a sour, silent gulp.

If you have felt a sudden chill

a tug at night that won’t sit still

look in the mirror, count once more

was that gap there the night before?

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

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Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk