The Deepest Sorrow

A submission to the Quadru-haiku challenge.

By Daniel MillingtonPublished about a year ago • 1 min read

Photo by Sam Moghadam Khamseh on Unsplash

Waters break; crying,

The fire of life is missing

Her sweet soul, leaves Earth.

sad poetry heartbreak

About the Creator

Daniel Millington

A professional procrastinator that likes to weave short stories ranging from thought-provoking fiction to imaginative fantasy. Delve into worlds that twist your soul and bring magical creations to life.

I also like cake.

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Rachel Deeming3 months ago
Brief but really moving. "The fire of life is missing" is so sad.

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A submission to the Quadru-haiku challenge.

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