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The Condition I’m In

to be young again

By Gerry ThibeaultPublished 6 days ago • 1 min read
I used to get into a lot of trouble with this car

Tonight the sofa starts to scream and shout.

What little beer is gone, he rolls out into the garage.

 

Dredged on an endless chain of nothing new

pulls the cover from a bright orange car.

 

The seat worked in like a catcher’s mitt,

can you really think life gets any better than this?

 

Pulls into a parking lot, the Playboy Zanzibar.

On stage the sun left her alone and blue. She's

 

in love with the act before the act, flashes

of everything he believes is true, sharing

 

stares head to toe tattoo’s—long legged

red wine and real overdue, crestfallen

 

worked in like a catcher’s mitt, a pole to grip

wearing nothing but red shoes and prosperity.


Not a true sonnet but it has some internal rhyme and bit of rhythm and a volta. Maybe it could be classified as an American Sonnet?

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Gerry Thibeault

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    Written by Gerry Thibeault