i went to jail one time
through no fault of my own
the judge gave me ten years
ten
years
away
alone
when i say that it wasn't my fault
you know that's a barefaced lie
i embraced my dark side for a time
i still don't even know why
so without a fuss and no further ado
they flung me into a dark dingy cell
trust me when i say there is a heaven
because they...sent me... straight to hell
imagine everything bad in the world
and concentrate it all in one place
add boredom loathing and paranoia
limit and inhibit every single space
dark tendrils of the real and the imagined
gnaw away at your reason and mind
a suffocating shroud of gut wrenching fear
leaves you senseless, defenceless and blind
a wave of flaccid bitterness crashes
and crushes me hard up against my fate
it is this that i have done to myself
as i became a part of the systemic hate
i've seen the evil that lies in men's hearts
there is a taint of the blackness in us all
i have seen it leaving seen it bleeding
out of sight behind every wall
a malignant tattoo of malevolent fists
everything a clear and constant threat
every single misconstrued signal
n o room for feelings no time for regret
every single minute spent on edge
i still hear the noises that aren’t really there
silent echoes reach me from the past
a faint moan of loss and despair
but no noise at all was so much worse
you could feel the wrong in the silence
it promised blood it promised pain
it promised endless violence
i see myself now on shaky knees
back in the past where i once stood
having punished myself more severely
than any system ever could
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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Comments (12)
Wow, so honest and raw, yet beautifully told and constructed. So many great lines in here, and here is one (of many!) that I really connected with "there is a taint of the blackness in us all"....so true. Wonderful poem!
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Keep up the excellent work! Good day to ya.
PS - I helped create this monster (but getting him online here is about all I can take credit for)
I feel truly honoured to have had the original read to me. Still haunted.
Wow, that's great. Thank you.
This is so powerful and beautifully written!
Beautiful piece!
I knew a person, a writer, who went to prison, justly, but he just stopped writing. Great work!
Enjoyed it
That unfolded so well. Bleakly visceral. It felt like reading a first hand experience.
Great ending lines hearted
True story?