The Bridge Between Dream and Nightmare
Challenge #7 The Dream State
In my dreams,
I am constantly packing and unpacking
Ravelling and unravelling
Trying to stretch a house into a home
And fit it into a too-small unsuitable suitcase
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There’s always a flight I’m late to
That takes too many detours in the opposite direction
I’m constantly going the wrong way.
Security holds no fears in holding me up
Unverified identity, or too much baggage, something’s wrong
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There’s always something that puts me in a rush
A bus that ends up in a different town
Unwanted nightmare visitors trying to track me down
Or catch me, hurt me, kill me
Sometimes my dog just runs away
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Maybe I fear my destination
Or what might come once I’m there
Maybe I worry I can’t be myself
Or that myself won’t be accept
On the flight, on the ride, by those around me
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But in this dream state
Doors open and stretch
Windows never appear
The staircases reach a never-seen ceiling
As I wander through the spiralling sanity of my unconsciousness
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This poem was written for James & I's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza. The prompt was to write a fantasy fiction or a poem about your most recent dream(s). There is no word count or time limit for this challenge. Hopefully you'll try this out too!
You can read more about our crazy ambition summer challenge below:
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Oneg In The Arctic
A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.
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Comments (11)
Wow. Just wow. The imagery is so rich and beautiful.
Great and intresting post
This one is just perfect, really, really perfect. Captured the essence of a dream the subtle psychological reason behind it all rapped into a beautiful poem
I really liked some of this dream imagery Oneg - it was crazy!! 👏 😊 A fine entry.
This felt very unsettling, like the kinda dream that we would wake up from and feel so confused!
You capture the dreamscape so well, Oneg. It almost feels like remembering one of my own.
Excellent words, I will try and remember a dream, I have written a few about my dreams, but have to think of something that I can share
Very expressive!
Magnificent & marvelous bridge between dreams!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕
Great piece- packing and un-packing❤️😉💯👍🎉📝
This was great! Thank you for running this challenge.