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The breath before the plunge into the abyss.

Moments prior...

By Jordan ZunigaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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The sun that set into the west,

A gasp for air, a heavy chest,

With grey overcast as the gloomiest veil,

For all it would entail.

A flicker, a flash, an announcements of thunders disdain,

The mourning of the heavens, tear drops of the rain,

Anxious thoughts that run through the mind,

To search and seek for a remedy, to find,

Yearning for daylight to break free,

The dawn of the sun for the eyes to see,

But sorrow lingered within the atmosphere,

A constant thought of all that was unclear,

So it was beyond the norm,

The anxious breath, before the storm...

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Jordan Zuniga

Aspiring christian creative writer creating pieces to provoke thought and give God and Lord Jesus Christ the glory! God bless and I hope you’re doing well!

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