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The Blushing Moon

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By Hazel Rymell Published 4 months ago 1 min read
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The Blushing Moon
Photo by Nick Owuor (astro.nic.visuals) on Unsplash

The moon and stars

came out to play,

At the end of a long hot day.

Low in the sky,

the sun caught the moons eye,

As she took in his beautiful glow.

He melted her heart

as his fires grew bright,

Til his departure turned dusk into night.

Glancing at the blushing moon,

a star asks “Why are you red?”

“I’ve been chasing the sun around the world,

to wave him goodnight before bed!”

The laughing comet crept up from behind,

“I know why she is red;

she really couldn’t avert her eyes,

from hot sun getting ready for bed!”

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Hazel Rymell

..Suddenly I crash back down to earth with a big almighty bump!

...when not in a dolly daydream, creative me is at home in the UK doing the normal everyday mundane jobs, that seem to go on forever...until the daydreaming kicks in again...

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  • Linda Marry4 days ago

    hahaha, simple and cute ;)

  • Vivin Akshay9 days ago

    See A Glance If You Like Galaxy👉👉https://vocal.media/earth/galaxies-the-universe-s-masterpiece

  • Junior11 days ago

    Nice.

  • P. K. Gani11 days ago

    This was joy to read, nice work.

  • Love love love 😍 ✨🎯😉

  • So cute and charming!

  • Very cute 🥰

  • Jay13 days ago

    I love the idea of the moon and sun affecting each other, having a relationship. We thought it was just astrophysics!

  • Rachel Rose13 days ago

    Cute personifications 🌞🌚

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  • Cathy holmes14 days ago

    Congrats on the top story - well deserved.

  • Heather Hubler14 days ago

    Loved the moon blushing for chasing the sun and the comet laughing. This was so fun and sweet :) Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Pryor Da costa14 days ago

    Great story!! I post similar stuff and fiction stories like this one, you should check it out!! Have a good day!

  • sleepy drafts14 days ago

    I love this!! Absolutely wonderful! <3

  • Gina C.15 days ago

    This is so beautiful; I really loved the line about chasing the sun around. 😍 Excellent and well-done!

  • Daniel Jeyaraman15 days ago

    Impressive, beautifully written. ❤

  • C. H. Richard15 days ago

    Hearted and subscribed

  • C. H. Richard15 days ago

    Very sweet poem ❤️ I also love anything with the moon🌛

  • The answers are all there, they are just good at hiding from us, great work

  • That is lovely, the first piece of yours that I have read, so impressed I have subscribed

  • Cathy holmes15 days ago

    This is great. love it.

  • Keila Aartila15 days ago

    I'm a sucker for a moon poem - this was so cute! Fantastic! :)

  • Moe Radosevich15 days ago

    That’s really good, nice job, maybe the sun mooned her 🤦🏻‍♀️

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