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The Altar Of Love

A Study in Offering

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 9 months ago β€’ 1 min read

Does love demand sacrifice,

or simply receive what’s offered?

For all who love to answer.

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The altar

The middle

Of the home.

Polished marble

Small sacrifices in a

Central bowl.

A faint hum from itsΒ 

Centre.

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Only time.

Only sleep.

Only freedom.

The marble shines brighter

With each offering.

Only love.Β 

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His voice, for its glow.

Her preferences, for its sheen.

Their laughter. For its presence.

Soft gifts for its appetite.

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The altar.Β 

The marble shine -

Glows.

From the souls.

From the hearts.

From the whole gifts

Of selves.Β 

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They take the altar

Down.

It remains.

To shine

Or stay

In silence.Β 

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Original poem for Valentine's Day by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.

For Mikeydred's February Challenge

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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