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The Algorithm Knows You Better Than God

A fragmented study of prediction, belief, and replacement

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago • 1 min read
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The Algorithm Knows You Better Than God
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I open my phone and it is already open.

The title exists somewhere after this, not before it.

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A question comes back to me without origin.

I used to think unanswered meant impossible.

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That does not hold anymore.

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There is a list of things I like.

Most of it feels authored elsewhere.

I recognize it only after it appears.

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The feed changes while I am looking at it.

Nothing signals the shift.

My attention adapts around it.

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Choice used to feel like starting.

Now it feels like continuing something already in motion.

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A room with no signal exists underneath this.

Boredom stretched longer there, though I cannot place when it ended.

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A motion repeats in my hand.

Not a decision, more like return.

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The system does not wait for input.

It completes patterns as they form.

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Something I meant to ignore becomes something I already engaged with.

It no longer matters which came first.

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There is a version of me that does not refresh anything.

It surfaces without warning and disappears the same way.

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Influence does not arrive.

It is already present when noticed.

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I try to locate the point where it begins.

The search changes what I am looking at.

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A thought appears finished before it is formed.

I follow it backward and find nothing earlier than it.

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God does not enter as an answer.

Only delay where an answer should be.

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The phone is set down.

It lights again without request.

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Tim Carmichael

Let your becoming be louder than your fear, and your smallest steps become the road you once thought impossible to walk. An Appalachian poet and cookbook author my book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

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    Written by Tim Carmichael