Text Me, Already❗
Okay, I am not Going to Lie, I was walking 👣 by, and we caught eyes 👀 he said “Hi, put your number in my phone 📱”& I Did Now, I'm currently waiting to receive a Text from this guy…
I merely gave him my number, and already
I’m, staring at the phone…
Hoping,
That it be
Him…
I'm anxious to hear his tone…
Could I be wrong?
Still blushing
While Grown…
I can't hide the,
Apprehensive feelings
Inside.
I'm shaking my,
Shanks,
To keep them from
Numbing…
Am I the
Only one with this
Feeling?
Appealing, to myself
If he,
Likes me,
Really?
Okay, I should put the phone down
And not be silly 🙃 -
I should focus on having levity,
But I really
Wish he'd
Text me already… ☺️
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I can't imagine dying like this, in a place like this; on a cold, dirty pavement with rush hour traffic screaming by and a crowd looking on while paramedics struggle to find space to move. Who could? Deep down we all think there should be a reason, a moment of clarity... or a family presence, at least. For this man, this boy, the rail thin woman lighting a cigarette in a faux fur jacket will have to do - she's been here since the start, her eyes tracking the movement of my shoulders as we fight to keep him on the right side of the line.
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Comments (13)
Great little piece - that anticipatory feeling is so hard to describe but you did it so well!
You obviously know what women want. Lots of love for this poem!
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Ahh, the angst of anticipation. Sweet and sour.
You’re not alone! 🩵👏🏼
Omgggg! I know that feeling all too well. Loved your poem!
No, you're not the only one. I don't know if we ever get over that feeling. I mean, just look at how anxious so many of us still get over whether others will respond to our stories or comments, lol.
This us great. Now,.put down the phone. 😁
fantastic writing enjoyable to read,😀🤦♂️
Lovely work! So relatable! This piece reminds me of Fantasia Barrino's song when I see you! 😍 Can't wait 2 hear about the date! 😉
This was enjoyable to read, so relatable when waiting for a text from someone we really want to get them from 😍
Ugh!!! That long wait can be agonizing at times, especially if they were the one who asked for the number. 😵💫
Good that you are showing your honest feelings. Good luck.