Temptation
.
It's that old feeling welling up
that devil's dance dancing
that midnight's delight spinning
Ahhh….
that sweet anticipation
that dark horizon building
that bad moon rising
that urging....
My good soul, stay away
My innocent heart, stay safe
but, but
Mmmm….
that longing desire
that reason escaping
that judgement passing
that, that....
I know how good it feels
TO SIN
but, after
Ohhh….
that regret, that why did I?
that I won't again, that I promise
then, again…
there's
that sweet whisper
that temptation calling
that anticipation growing
that weakness brewing
that old debate
coming round again
am I good.... Am I bad
stay strong, righteous path
give in, sinner's road
I know I shouldn't,
I swear I do
but....
that bad habit
that siren song singing
that pied piper dancing
that tornado....
spinning around
my restless soul
threatening
to touch down again
overcome, stay above
surrender, sink below
I should walk away
I know I should
But….
that craving
that, that
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I love this! It's relatable and foreboding and so well written!! Great work Will!