The terrible tortoise tossed the trembling toad
To the target- the tiger-triggering tongue to tease
Toads, to tiny, to tantalize the tiger's taste
Teddy trotted toward the trees
The tiger turned toward tormented Teddy
The tortoise tripped to the trees
Trying to trap tears
About the Creator
Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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Comments (2)
😂 great minds!!
This was so much fun, I love it! You did a marvellous job!