engrossing images marvels the eyes of a child whose
celluloid fantasies establish a stage for influence...
life is a collection of pivotal moments, providing
instances of grandeur, impacting the thoughts of personal missions
passionate dreams lead to golden ventures when they
solidify, move forward and compliment the direction of academic pursuit
every child is a bundle of potential, foraging through their imagination, searching for that rare stardust… not yet knowing that failure is waiting to strengthen... The Force.
About the Creator
Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
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On Winning and Losing
Recently, the pleasant surprise of placement on the Vocal Bonus Leaderboard sent me down a rabbit hole. Now, rabbit holes are a pretty common place for me to spend time, but I don't always feel the call to write about them. To be honest, the thought of sharing some of them mortifies me.
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Brilliant & Beautiful! BRAVO Lamar! 💪🏾
The stories (movies) we enjoy as kids has such an impact on us 😁
Stardust sprinkled by pixies on every child's dream, wishing them to awaken to fulfill their highest potential. Magical and hopefully realized by all. Such profound words for childhood wishes. Lovely poetry.
Aw, I love the message of this so much, along with the word choices! I was playing around with the word "grandeur" the other day and couldn't quite make it fit. So lovely to see it here - you've constructed thus beatifully 🤗
My favourite lines are "passionate dreams lead to golden adventures when they solidify" and "every child is a bundle of potential, foraging through their imagination, searching for that rare stardust…" This is so important and cannot be overstated. I believe there's an Afrikan proverb that says that a "child not embraced by the village will burn it down to feel its warmth." There are definite nuances available here, since if we do not connect with our purpose, express our creativity as aspects of our destiny, and/or do not connect with the unique divinity within us... the only place left, is a space for darkness to fill. Great take on the challenge!
Excellent acrostic, Lamar! I'm impressed by the unique theme, too!
Excellent work Lamar. I like how you dramatically advanced the poem's ultimate message.
Straight up love this bc Tatooine was my fav in Star Wars Battlefront 2
This was extremely powerful and it packed a punch! Loved your Acrostic!
This is a wonderfully clever and devious entry to the Eclipse Acrostic challenge, Lamar. The Death Star eclipsing the sun is pure, hysterical genius!
I love this! You went Star Wars on the end!
Instances of grandeur. I think I will now declare myself in pursuit of an instance of grandeur when I'm after a certain type of entertainment.
So the force consists of failure? Yoda would not be pleased.
There are some wisdom in the poetry . Excellent acoustic poetry !!!!