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tar seeped within

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By Andrea Corwin Published 2 years ago • 1 min read
tar seeped within
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tiny potholes

tearing her heart

he fills the beating ventricles with

tarry blacktop,

scarring the surfaces

with hot burns until

it seeps deep within,

slowing the beats to

teeny ticktocks

stealing her soul

bleeding her like a leach

leaving rusty blood speckles

in her lungs and heart

now

scarred

stabbed

scabbed

was cruelly deserted

and is now a scorched dead desert

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