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Tangled Remnants

… split and twisted.

By Tim GracePublished 3 years ago • 1 min read

Where once a solid form existed

there's nothing left but shard.

Tangled remnants, split and twisted,

tossed without regard.

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Earth ripped and roughly gashed.

Features stripped and shattered.

Levees broken, structures smashed,

strewn about and scattered.

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And in amongst this mangled mess,

there stands a man forlorn:

too numb to feel distress;

too tired to weep or mourn.

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At crisis points, when faith is shaken,

it's then, when man feels most forsaken.

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© Tim Grace, 18 March 2011

Revised: 25 October 2023

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Tim Grace

A first impression has a lasting effect - it makes a notable difference. In a subtle way that’s who I am as a poet. A ‘first impression’ looking for the gentle ‘twist’ that draws attention to a novel observation.

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    Written by Tim Grace