Daises bloom across grassy land.
Infiltrating muddy minds.
Spreading a much-needed lightness to the stress of city bees.
The humming of buzzy pollinators wakes me from my dream.
Relaxing in nature was just what I needed.
Anxious minds like mine need reminding of what really matters.
Calloused hands tell lies. Lifting iron is no replacement for nature.
Time expires like a dry riverbed.
It flows by, slowly evaporating as it waits for you.
On the grass, I lay. Wishing my break wouldn’t end.
Nothing compares to this. The alarm sounds. Back to work while the river dries.
About the Creator
Simon George
I write poetry, fiction, and non-fiction. In 2021, I published my debut book "The Truth Behind The Smile" a self-help guide for your mental health based on my personal experience with depression. Go check it out.
IG: @AuthorSimonGeorge
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I feel like I was laying on the grass with you listening to the birds chirp and the hot sun on my face 😁
GREAT WORK!!!!!