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Swallowed Sun

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By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published 2 years ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Swallowed Sun

A hush drapes over midday’s glow,

shadow creeping, measured, slow.

The sun once fierce,

once bright, once whole,

wanes beneath the moon’s control.

Gold turns ashen, dim and frail,

a phantom ring, a silent veil.

Daylight falters, cold and thin,

as darkness dares to step within.

A breathless world, a frozen tide,

eyes uplifted, arms spread wide.

Yet light, though stolen, waits its turn

a smoldering ember set to burn.

A Swallowed Sun.

A hush drapes over midday’s glow,

shadow creeping, measured, slow.

The sun once fierce,

once bright, once whole

wanes beneath the moon’s control.

Gold turns ashen, dim and frail,

a phantom ring, a silent veil.

Daylight falters, cold and thin,

as darkness dares to step within.

A breathless world, a frozen tide,

eyes uplifted, arms spread wide.

No hand can halt the turning sphere,

the dark will pass, but leave its smear.

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

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Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk