Silent suffering
sighs, stuttering
shadows shuddering
such shallow sustainingā¦
still
stage show starting
shining, shimmering
soul song simmering
see sparkles showering
so
sing. Sing. Sing!
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Sneha Pradhan
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The Voyeur's Incandescent Reasoning
The woman sat nonplussed, in the Waiting Room. In a sort of daze, looking straight ahead patiently. She had already had three small breakfast's that morning and a nip of sherry, this was not unusual she would typically wait until an hour after she took her anti-depressant and was her morning routine. She was merely following instructions she assured herself, shifted slightly in her seat and feeling a little heart burn thought, maybe she should skip lunch. Dom had said to have the task done this week. She was well used to his methods and desired to get this over and done with soon. She glanced at her watch, smiled weakly at the Receptionist who was there for a moment and then gone.
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This was so deep and true. We often pretend to be happy although we're suffering silently inside. Fantastic Tautogram!
Super!!!
Nice piece, beautiful imagery.
Nice piece ā¤ļøšI want that picture as my screen saverā