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Surrender

A poem

By Gal MuxPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Surrender
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Did it all,

In the intensity and in the mildness. 

Surrendered to it I aimed

Take the blame for it, I did not

Rowed in the storms and in the sunshine. 

Acted like it didn't matter 

Cold heart 

Tough like steel I wanted to feel.

In the end I realised,

Only in the end did I truly see that,

Nothing could help, if I didn't allow myself to surrender to the pain that got me there in the first place.

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About the Creator

Gal Mux

Lover of all things reading & writing, 🥭 &

🍍salsas, 🍓 & vanilla ice cream, MJ & Beyoncé.

Nothing you learn is ever wasted - Berry Gordy

So learn everything you can.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Acceptance is definitely the first step to moving on. Fantastic poem!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Fantastic piece. I love the conflict throughout, and the insight of how to overcome it. ❤️

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