Sunshine In The Darker Spaces
A Deeper Sleep of Darker Tones
Light the way, luminate the leaves full of colorless cover
The ground speaks of secrets told by best friends following a path
Long steps, short breaths you take in a bit of the sunshine
Fold your legs to the ground, close your eyes never make a sound
Wonder isn't excluded between the hollow trees, for something could be built a warm fire
Peak your head above the hill, don't slip into the mud
Find yourself in a winter chill, over something you thought you'd desire
Leave your worries at the entrances, get lost in yourself
You're everything you need to be at this given moment, an abundance pool of wealth
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Mason Darnielle
My love for nature really expands my love for writing and creating pieces that anyone can enjoy!! I want to published a Poem book one day I think its important to share what your goals are, if you want to support my journey donate monthly!
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Comments (4)
Love this one. Very sensory and inspiring. Excellent work Mason! 😊👏
This took me right to my favorite autumn leaf covered trail, and to the wonder that lies within (the earth and me:))
Beautifully written. I really want to go out for a long hike in nature now.
This was so optimistic, powerful and uplifting! Loved your poem!