Suns Got My Back
its got all of me
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i've got the sun
on my back
and its
warming my bones
stewing any marrow
i might have
in me in them
my spine
is in the sun
alive in the sun
every nerve
a slow burning
every nerve
a glow yearning
this radiated warmth
of a warming radiation
has passed through
the harshness
the vastness
of both
time and space
to warm my back
bringing life and
bringing light
to warm my back
bringing heat and
bringing bright
to warm my back
and everything
just right
nearly nearly
out of sight
quintessentially tight
feeling really good oiright
angling dangling in the light
not welcoming any night
bathing in a healing bright
oh to behold a similar sight
and then a cloud
i’ve got the sun
on my side
as its drifts
in it's arc
warming my angles
my profile
my side
it drifts
i move
to absorb it all
a reflective refreshment
a restorative refueling
merely a mental
dry dock retooling
the sides got the sun
or the suns got my side
i twist and i pivot
i stretch and i glide
i hover i hold
i reach and i ride
i quiver i shake
i teach i imbibe
i
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Brenton F
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