One afternoon I said to myself,
"Why isn't the lifting more easy?"
Are you upset by how strong it is?
Does it tear you apart to see the lifting so severe?
*
Don't belive that the noontime is ugly?
The noontime is Beautiful beyond belief.
Are you upset by how well-favored it is?
Does it tear you apart to see the noontime so aesthetical?
*
The big predawn sings like a Purple sky
Does the predawn make you shiver?
Does it?
*
The zany sidereal sings like stars
Now clowlike is just the thing,
To get me wondering if the sidereal is unreasonable.
*
The new is not unexciting!
The new is exceptionally breathless.
Never forget the titillating and breathless new.
*
I cannot help but stop and look at the dreamy sundown.
Are you upset by how languid it is?
Does it tear you apart to see the sundown so moony?
Does it?
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"the new is exceptionally breathless" - Lines I wish I wrote. Man this was fantastic, please keep writing!