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Suicide

Broken inside

By Edward ValPublished 6 months ago • 1 min read
Suicide
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My hand begins to tremble

As my finger starts to squeeze

The barrels to my brow now

As I rest upon my knees

Tears slowly seeping from the corners

Of my eyes though unable to

Openly cry. Throat dry

Because I can’t control the war that rages

On inside that which is I

Take a shallow breath, release a sigh

As the hammer falls and the bullet flies

Ah, the pointlessness of suicide.

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About the Creator

Edward Val

I'm a poet by nature and a Soldier by trade and my writing reflects my experiences not only in life but also in war. I use writing as way to express myself and deal with the horrors I've seen and hope my words can help my fellow Veterans.

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