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Suicide Suicide

An Acrostic Sonnet and a Double-Single Thought

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Suicide Suicide
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In this day and age, I am supposed to warn the reader that the subject matter may be sensitive, as if worse events had never happened before and will never happen again. This is not a children’s platform, although some adults can be mistaken for tall tots and vice versa.

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Sun and Moon beneath the skin’s itching spring

Understanding is a small part of it

Insignificance was never a curse

Candidly passing the rope for a string

Impossible without within to fit

Deliverance as sleep without the hearse

Every animal condemned like a tree

Suspended between bluish and brown dust

Uncovered before a naked mirror

Imploring the Cosmos to become free

Carrying massive mountains of mistrust

In denial when the time is nearer

Do not cry for me warm Antarctica

Each wound could be covered with arnica

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Dedicated to Jean Améry. This is not a cry for help, especially in the form of an acrostic sonnet.

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Fiddler on the Roof - If I Were a Rich Man

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Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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