Everything about Jesse was smooth
All hair was held in place
No winkles on any clothes
It all reflected good taste
There was a desire that oozed
Into your dreaming mind
A longing to tarry
And spend a little time
A pressing of moist lips
A tingle that echoes through the body
A sweet tension begins build
It is a feeling oh so naughty
How can it be resisted
Such a captivating desire
attention it grasps
As it feeds the burning fire
A pair are consumed
From a deep penetration
It thrusts into all their thoughts
Such a sweet sensation
A gentle rocking
As together two move
There is one thing to admit
Jesse is very smooth
About the Creator
Mark Stigers
One year after my birth sputnik was launched, making me a space child. I did a hitch in the Navy as a electronics tech. I worked for Hughes Aircraft Company for quite a while. I currently live in the Saguaro forest in Tucson Arizona
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Comments (2)
! Your poem "Smooth" captures the essence of the theme with a delightful play of words. The repetition of the word "smooth" reinforces the central idea and adds a rhythmic quality to the poem. The descriptions of Jesse being smooth in various aspects, from appearance to desire, create a vivid and appealing image. The poem effectively builds an atmosphere of desire and sensuality through phrases like "pressing of moist lips" and "a tingle that echoes through the body." The use of imagery and sensory details enhances the reader's experience, making it more engaging. The closing lines, "A gentle rocking, As together two move, There is one thing to admit, Jesse is very smooth," provide a satisfying conclusion and bring the focus back to the smoothness of Jesse, creating a cohesive feel throughout the poem. Overall, your poem successfully conveys a sense of allure and desire, and the repeated emphasis on "smooth" ties the elements together effectively. Great job! chatGPT
Oooo, this was so smooth and steamy! Fantastic poem for the challenge!