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Stop The Bloodshed

The Unnecessary Line Challenge

By Susan PaytonPublished 8 months ago • Updated 8 months ago • 1 min read
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if I give you a rose now

would you stop the violence somehow

would you stop the gunfire that rings loud

will you stop the shedding of blood

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if I gave you a rainbow in the sky

would you even think to ask why

that people in war continue to die

please stop the bomb thuds

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stop the destruction in Ukraine

it is all fighting, that is in vain

how many men have been slain

will you stop if I gave you a flower bud?

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things in nature are more beautiful than anything in the Universe

does the fighting between Cambodia and Thailand have to continue

despite world leaders finding them a different venue

will you find something more peaceful on the menu

will you stop if you saw a flower dying in the icy mud

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does Israel and Hamas have to fight for survival

is the war about land or about religious revival

are the people of Hamas suffering from deprival

would you stop if I gave you a beautiful splash of water and not a flood

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what would it take to stop the violence

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Susan Payton

I love to write in every venue. I am 76 years old and try to make every day count,. I am learning a great deal about poetry.

You can find me at medium.com/susan-payton

Or on my publication-medium.com/simple-gardening

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