A set of eyes made of camera lenses take a prolonged shot of a bundle of flowers
The slow movement of the after hours
Box of open bandaids,
Mindlessly peeling off the covers
The absence of your mind,
The presence of our body’s like abandoned towers
Standing very still
The floor is no longer under your feet
Theres only one tile between you and any fate you’ve been strategically avoiding to meet
The sugar coated walls start to disintegrate, peeling off the sheets
But it’s in this stillness that we sleep
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Goldie
Addiction to my pen sweeping cobwebs in my mind
The brief feeling of structure when my thoughts start to rhyme
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I love this piece!!! - it has a stillness and a calm that starts with the image and moves sinuously through your lines!