Startling Sybil's Sibilance
All in -S-
Startling Sybil’s stuttering stopped
Sporadically since springtime
Sounds, sparrows, squeals
Sybil sighed softly
**
Surrounding stream's sources
Sixteen, seventeen swans
Swimming splendidly serene
Sybil sees satisfaction
Swallows swoop skies
Soaring, surging starlings
Such soulful sights
Sybil sways side-to-side
***
Sybil’s sputtering stopped
Since summertime songs
Slowly, silently, sunnily
Sybil smiles satisfaction
About the Creator
Eugenette Morin
I enjoy short stories with a twist, long stories that meander; little snippets that create poems.
I've been writing for a long time, but it's always been left dormant in a notebook.
So now's the time to see if I should take it out.
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