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Star Burst Of Happiness

by Mariann Carroll 3 months ago in art
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Sunny Way

Jimmy Cliff , I can see Clearly Now (@Mila Atwal)

This Poem is inspired by Jimmy Cliff

Sun Sunny Day

How I love the beauty the Sun bring

Seeing clearly how my friends love me with

Their Good vibes

Their support

Their unconditional Love

Their Prayers to God Almighty

Seeing the rainbow appear right

Before my very eyes.

How clearly the unattainable

Just happen out of the blue

How I so feel Love

Attaining freedom from the Shackles

Of life.

It’s like an Unchain Melody that

Is finally here.

They greatest music in my ear.

Come feel the infinity power

With me and share the home

Of love so clearly here.

It’s such a Sunny day in my heart.

Thank You for this everlasting

Energy the burst within us all.

Let this Sunny day surround you everyday.

I hope the song and poem bring you

Joy and Hope , of wishes to come true .

Have a Sun Sunny day so all the

Cloud of doubt has clear away.

Our hope and prayers for tomorrow

Are Finally here today .

I can see Them Clearly Now .

I Love you All

Thank you ! !!!

( You Know Who you All are , Energy hugs )🫶🏽😻🤑🥳🥰😇🏆🙏🏽🌈🌞🌻🌹


About the author

Mariann Carroll

Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.

Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .

fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living

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  • John Eva3 months ago

    I love the juxtaposition and the prose here - you need to keep writing for sure!

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    This is great, and inspiring. Well done

  • Babs Iverson3 months ago

    Positively brilliant!👏😊💖😊💕

  • Heather Hubler3 months ago

    Yes, I loved all the little nods you gave to so many happy songs! Thank you for the hope and positivity :)

  • Judey Kalchik3 months ago

    So many song references in your poem of positivity!

  • This was wonderful! Full of positive vibes and gratitude. You are the Sun bringing light to our lives with your poem 💖

  • I love the uplifting feeling you generate with thes words and a great song to include as well

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