Scared as can be and I’m stuck in a rut.
Shakiness inside steady boiling my gut.
I knew I shouldn’t have been tripping
It looks like I’m getting a whipping
Mommas about to come tap that butt.
About the Creator
Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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Comments (3)
Well done
Oh yes!!! Well done!!!
Well, at least you didn't have to get your own switch off the tree. LOL!