Something About the Rain
It Is Rain That Grows Flowers, Not Thunder. - Rumi
There’s nothing like the rain
To give me a coffee high
While sitting in my favorite chair
Watching dreams go by.
There’s something about the rain
Falling from up high
That weighs upon my weary heart
And brings about a sigh.
In the middle of the storm
When the world seems dark and gray
There’s something about the rain
That’s sending me away
To times so long forgotten
To a life I half recall
While the fury of the wind
Batters down my memory’s wall.
When I’ve had no time to think on things
But business and my pain,
The Lord shines down upon me,
And sends a little rain.
There’s just something about the rain
That beckons to my heart
To take a moment and reflect
To make a brand-new start.
When the earth has reached its season
And budding life begins to wane
Baptismal skies send life anew
Because there's something about the rain.
About the Creator
Veronica Coldiron
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Comments (10)
Wow! Thank you for sharing this! it was on point with the flow and imagery. The very first stanza that ended with 'watching dreams go by' struck a nerve with me. Watching the rain is a time to reflect and you've successively interpreted that reflection. Really well done!
Super superb and loved ot!!!❤️❤️💕
A very beautiful poem. The flow and rhyming scheme don't feel forced at all. Well done!
Wow, the combination of your words, the music and the pictures, gave me such a magnificent experience. Breathtakingly beautiful!
Wow, this was really beautiful!!
I love the sound - I love the pictures, and the words wrap it all up together in harmony. Fantastic
What a gorgeous poem ❤️🥰The rain song video was very cozy. Like I enter into a cozy world. I just want to stay and relax . Thanks for the invite in your comfort poem
I felt this so much!! Not only was your poetry beautiful, but the music and the pictures were a lovely added gift. I loved this!
This is beautiful!
I liked this a lot. I really think you encapsulated what a lot of people find comforting/enjoyable out the rain.