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So good it was

In loving memory to those who loose their mental battle

By Diana GomezPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

So good it was...

This is how the farewell phrases begin, of those who with a broken heart 💔 show to others how much you were worth, the amazing things you did or how great you were.

Was anyone capable of showing such kindness? If at the end of your path, despite everything they said you had, everything you possessed, how much they told how they admire you, you end up in A CORNER.

The mental agony was stronger. The voices that do not shut up were stronger. Those that accompany you, even in the middle of the dark night, with a little moonlight.

Was anyone able to notice your sadness? If at the end of the curves of your smile, he was not able to see the trembling of the cheeks. I don't think there is anyone capable of such delicacy. If at the end of the day, as much as they said, you end up at the end of the day in A CORNER.

The mental agony was stronger. The voices that did not shut up were stronger. Those who are not silent. Those that roar, those that burn like lit lights, because although they go with you in the dark night, they take advantage of the absolute silence to torment you, they don't want to shut up, those ominous voices.

At the end, you decide to leave, because no one knows how to listen to you, no one can accept you as you are. At the end, when your voice doesn't sound anymore, when your laughter doesn't sing, when your eyes don't shine and your perfume doesn't adorn, everyone will want to get closer to shout anyway...

As good as she/he was, we will miss him/her.

Copyright. Diana Gomez

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About the Creator

Diana Gomez

Born and rise in Puerto Rico. Always remembering about a gift my mother gave me on a birthday “you love words, one day you’ll write a book” and here I am…

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