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Slow Strokes

Make it last forever...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 5 months ago β€’ Updated 4 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Slow Strokes
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My Legs

We're shaking

And My eyes

Rolled back...

The feeling

Of your caress,

Sliding down

My lower back!

You put your hands

On my shoulders and

Let them rest for a while...

And when you Tickle my

Feet you make me

Smile like a child...

Take your time,

Make it last forever.

This is not cheating, but if so

I am not regretting...

Thank you for this massage, I'm fine without

The Happy Ending...


About the Creator

HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

Your Mind is

A Wonderland of

Your Imagination

Make it Beautiful!

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Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Veronica Coldiron5 months ago

    >ahem< I forgot what I was going to say for a moment there. LOL! GREAT poem!

  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    Oh wow! That was great!

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