i stuck my head out of a car window-
not looking at the road ahead-
or hearing the surround sound noise-
just seeing the Sky-
-
it was beautiful-
i was going to work-
and the Sky was just as magical as it was in the desert-
just as impressive as it was when it was peering down on the ocean-
just as captivating-
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i was home-
when i realized the Sky was magnificent everywhere-
my eyes inhaled the Sky-
i didn't document it-
i kept it for myself-
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and as i'm scraping my life-
into some replica of a portrait of organization i've dreamt up-
i'm resisting the urge to escape to a Sky that isn't my own
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Fantastic!!!
Nice, yet the last phrase is washed, I hope my open critic is ok.