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Silence Is Loud

It was the silence.

By Imran Ali ShahPublished 6 months ago • 3 min read

It wasn’t the shouting that broke her.

It was the silence.

Areeba used to think that love ended with loud arguments—doors slamming, voices raised, words thrown like weapons. That’s how movies showed it. That’s how stories made heartbreak look.

But no one ever talked about the quiet.

The kind of quiet that slowly grows between two people who once couldn’t stop talking.

It started small.

“Did you eat?” she asked one evening, placing a plate on the table.

“Yeah,” Sameer replied, not looking up from his phone.

That was it.

No smile. No “thank you.” No “how was your day?”

Just a word.

Areeba sat across from him, waiting. Waiting for something more. But nothing came. Only the soft ticking of the clock on the wall.

Tick.

Tick.

Tick.

It sounded louder than usual.

Days turned into weeks, and the silence grew heavier.

They still lived in the same house. Slept on the same bed. Sat across from each other at dinner.

But it felt like they were miles apart.

“Are you okay?” she asked one night, her voice careful.

“Hmm,” he responded.

That single sound echoed in the room like an unfinished sentence.

Areeba wanted to scream.

Not because he was angry.

But because he wasn’t.

He was just… absent.

She began to notice the little things.

How he stopped asking about her work.

How he no longer laughed at her random stories.

How their conversations became transactions.

“Tea?”

“Okay.”

“Lights off?”

“Yeah.”

No feelings. No connection. Just words doing the bare minimum.

And somehow, that hurt more than any harsh sentence ever could.

One night, the power went out.

The room fell into darkness, wrapped in an uneasy stillness. No fan. No light. No distractions.

Just them.

Areeba sat up. “Sameer?” she called softly.

No answer.

She turned toward him. She could barely see his outline in the dark.

“Can we talk?” she asked.

A pause.

Then, “About what?”

Her chest tightened.

“About us.”

Silence.

The kind that feels like it’s pressing against your ribs.

“I don’t know what you want me to say,” he finally replied.

Areeba let out a shaky breath. “Anything. Just… something real.”

Another pause.

“I’m tired,” he said.

That was it.

Three words.

But they felt like a wall.

Tears rolled down her cheeks, unseen in the darkness.

“You don’t fight for us anymore,” she whispered.

“I’m here, aren’t I?” he said.

She laughed softly, a broken sound.

“No,” she said. “You’re not.”

The silence that followed was deafening.

It screamed everything he wasn’t saying.

It shouted the distance between them.

It echoed with all the words they never spoke.

And in that moment, Areeba understood something she never had before.

Silence isn’t empty.

It’s full.

Full of ignored feelings. Unspoken pain. Forgotten love.

Days later, she packed her things.

Not in anger.

Not in a rush.

But quietly.

The same way everything between them had ended.

Sameer stood by the door, watching.

“You’re leaving?” he asked.

His voice sounded unfamiliar, like he hadn’t used it in a while.

Areeba nodded.

“You didn’t stop me,” she said gently.

He opened his mouth… then closed it.

No words came out.

Just silence.

She picked up her bag and walked past him.

For a second, she hoped—just hoped—that he would say something.

Anything.

Her name.

A reason to stay.

A sign that the silence didn’t mean the end.

But the air remained still.

Heavy.

Quiet.

As she stepped outside, the world felt louder.

Cars passing. People talking. Life moving.

And yet, inside her, there was a strange calm.

Because she finally understood—

The loudest goodbye isn’t shouted.

It’s the one you never hear.

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