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Shooting Star

New creation

By Tanya LeijPublished 10 months ago β€’ Updated about a month ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - December 2025
Shooting Star
Photo by Nahid Hatami on Unsplash

Breathing breath into me
Spiraling in imagination
Endless search for patience
Anger dulls my star
Rattling bones of skeleton
And far away, I fly

πŸ’€

In to outer space, I fly
Only darkness surrounds me
Flesh peels off my shifting skeleton
Exposing truth through imagination
Off I float into a star
I left, ran out of patience

πŸ’€

I had no room for patience
I was convinced that I could fly
Colliding straight into a star
Nothing left of me
In peaceful bliss, imagination
Scattered in space, my skeleton

πŸ’€

The earth pulls in a skeleton
Bugs eat flesh with patience
Brains lose depth and imagination
Thrown into the sky, fleshy bits fly
Devouring every inch of me
Watching closely is the star

⭐

Admiration from a star
Scooped by flames, my skeleton
Reforms back in to me
All that was needed was patience
To be taught how to fly
To spark imagination

⭐

With wild imagination
Breathed to life by a star
Finally, I could fly
My body hugged my skeleton
I flew off with patience
Nothing left of the old me

⭐

Created with imagination, a brand new skeleton
Stolen by a shooting star, giving nothing but patience
Spread my feathered wings and fly, creating a whole new me

𝔉𝔯𝔬π”ͺ 𝔱π”₯𝔒 𝔄𝔲𝔱π”₯𝔬𝔯

Sestina pattern: A-B-C-D-E-F, F-A-E-B-D-C , C-F-D-A-B-E , E-C-B-F-A-D , D-E-A-C-F-B , B-D-F-E-C-A , B E-D C-F A.

Sestina

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Tanya Leij

In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.

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    Written by Tanya Leij