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She Is A Broken Mess

An explosion of love, passion and anger

By Colleen Millsteed Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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I see her and there’s no other way to describe her

She is an absolute mess, as I’m sure you’ll agree,

The state of her emotions, that dark look in her eyes

She successfully passes as normal or so she believes.

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She’ll stumbled over flat ground, tripping with ease

Picking up her freshly broken pieces and moves on,

Embarrassed, due to being the centre of attention

She waltzes out with her head held high and strong.

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She struggles to talk as she stutters and stumbles

Her words and feelings held hostage by her fears,

You can feel the rush of her anger, her frustration

As she needed her strength and not her damn tears.

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She stands there willingly before you, head bowed

Her warm bloody heart held in her battered hands,

She shows you her brokenness, her sorrow, her pain

But she will never bow down, pridefully she stands.

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She bites her tongue, holding in her rage and anger

As she attempts to still the tiny tremble, the shaking,

Her feelings jumping and jiggling, trying to break out

Her love, her passion and her anger, almost escaping.

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No matter how you look at her, there’s no denying

That’s she’s a hot mess, a bat shit crazy cyclone,

She knows she is a nightmare, a gory horror show

But also shines brightly, as pretty as a rhinestone.

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She is made up of messy emotions, all out of control

Gale force feelings locking her into the eye of the storm,

Spinning faster and faster as she suddenly shatters

An explosion of love, passion and anger transformed.

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Once the commotion dies out, you’ll see strange signs

Left by the ferocious destruction, after she withdrew,

Then you heard her warn, “you must take a safe detour

Around my brokenness, before it makes a mess of you.”

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Originally posted on Medium

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About the Creator

Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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