Shattered Glass Cloche
A Mikeydred One Week Sad Poem Challenge For All Vocal Creators
I’ve come undone and
stand in so many pieces , tiny shards
I shattered, while I twirled
for you!
Encased in a glass cloche
you put me on a pedestal
and I piled my hair in a high coif,
holding it with
your gift,
those damnable porcelain umbrellas clips.
I twirled, my skirt swirling in -
an umbrella-like arc.
But you walked away while I dervished for you,
your back facing me.
That broke my spirit, my heart.
My legs cracked and my feet split.
I cried out for you to stop, and watch me,
all the while inching my heel closer, closer, aiming
for a smashing footfall.
Yes, the success was mine, you fool!
Your precious records split into tiny shards,
mirroring my heart.
I give a toast to you, my love, red lips you adored
tilted upward in sweet freedom, as my hair comes undone.
Copyright © 1/26/2025 by Andrea O. Corwin
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Andrea Corwin
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