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Seven Nuts

Nine Parts

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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Almonds are like eyes

They can taste like life itself when it’s fine

Skinless they are healthy like the Sun

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Brazil nuts are like livers

They can taste like almonds in fever

Selenium’s cavern within stone

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Hazelnuts are like hearts

Perhaps the reason why they’re my favourite

Almost bare they fill the heart

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Macadamia nuts are like bigger hearts

Hawai’i is automatically attached

Naked they are full of mirth and good fats

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Pecans are like little intense brains

They can taste like the Moon after dark

Raw they look like soldiers going to war

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Pistachios are like little kidneys

Eat me they almost whisper opening their shells

Starting is easier than ceasing to eat them

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Walnuts are like bigger-bent brains

They also taste like life only on a different lane

Ready to be eaten even in a salad

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There are of course other nuts

for which I’m not quite nuts

There are nuts and there are nuts

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There are also the false nuts

like cashews and peanuts and soy

It’s not the reason I dislike those

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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  • Anna 2 months ago

    "Almonds are like eyes" Beautiful poem!🥰

  • Anthi Psomiadou2 months ago

    A unique and special way to see nuts. It is a tasteful and smart piece!

  • Asad Message2 months ago

    Is it worth it to become vocal plus?

  • Asad Message2 months ago

    I want to know how to get top story

  • Christy Munson2 months ago

    My daily snacking includes every variety of nut and imposter nut you mentioned, and not once had these thoughts occurred to me. This pice is so imaginative it has me looking at my snacks in a completely different light. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Anthony Terry2 months ago

    excellent poetry! i love all your nut choices

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    I love nuts and I love reading your poem!

  • PK Colleran2 months ago

    I enjoyed this very much. Congrats on Top Story!

  • Gentle Saviour2 months ago

    Interested

  • Lol, why are those false nuts? Loved your poem!

  • Alex H Mittelman 3 months ago

    Interesting! Great work!

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