Senseless
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Every surface of your room,
Covered in darkness
Like a black satin sheet.
Intimacy and anonymity
Paradoxically take over my
Senses -- senseless.
Every. Single. Time.
About the Creator
Kiersten Weldon
My brain is where most of my stories go to die. Whatever survives will end up here. Eventually.
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Comments (9)
Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳
Wow your choice of words really created such excellent imagery. I loved the idea of this too, darkness to heighten the senses. Well done! And congrats on the top story!
That is amazing, I really enjoyed this! I think you might enjoy mine too.
I loved what you did with this challenge. Well done :)
I love the paradox you've drawn there.
It’s something about, “Senses -- senseless.” that does it for me. Congrats on Top Story!
Lovely poem!
Erotic and a Top Story? That works... 🏅
Congratulations on TS!