I smiled, puffed, inhaled
My lungs caught fire, my eyes burned
Careful with that weed!
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Tried to catch his eye
Awkward!!! He hurried away.
Gave him the stink eye
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I wrote an Haiku
Thinking it was Senryu
Oi, what a snafu!
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I sat through the class
Biology seemed quite odd
It was Chemistry
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I planted the seeds
Gave tomatoes love and care
The trees yielded beans!
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Novel Allen
Clouds come floating into my life, no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add color to my sunset sky. ~~ Rabindranath Tagore~~
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Comments (20)
Fabulous and Flyy! Go No Go!
Excellent senryu's!
Fabulous!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️
The whole weed thing passed me by. This makes me feel OK about that :-D xx
To the first I would simply add, "be careful around anything encouraging you to breathe in fire." Tried it once as a young lad. My brothers had decided to find out what smoking was like. They took a piece of notebook paper, rolled up a bunch of dry grass from the field behind our house, lit the end, & took turns taking a drag. I was fourth & last in line. All I got was a mouth full of fire. I don't smoke. My older brother Terry was at a home high school football game where a woman was smoking a cigarette behind him. He turned & asked if he could have a pull from it. She said, "Sure," & handed it to him. He pulled the lit end of the cigarette from the filter end which he handed back to her with a simple, "Thanks." Enjoyed all of your senryu snafus, btw.
Nice one!
Be careful with the weed. It may choke you😀 I loved this poem
Trippy poem 🤪
Biology seemed quite odd, it was chemistry! I bloody freaking laughed out so loud at that one! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 These were so hilarious!
hilarious one
Oye - You Snafu-Senryu-me - — Arigato — J-Bud
I can relate.
😍
Great job and I Did the same thing the first time ♥️💯😁📝 I tried to write a Senryu😉lol
I liked it a lot.
These are so much fun to read!
So relatable...
A great collection!
“Trees yielded beans!??” Lol!!! Is a snafu multiple Senryu? I’ve not idea what is going on here but this was fun!! 😆😁
These are all so funny, Novel! I think the bio/Chem mix up is my fav 🤣