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One Self to One Soul

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 7 days ago 1 min read
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Self

Self-centered

Not necessarily selfish

Reaching the whole-ness

may be a dangerous endeavour

and concept

One is not many

a few

or even two

Love of oneself may negate

at least a bit

somewhat

a lot

the love of the other

Love may be replaced

by duty

and tasks

Meditation

One brain

Five senses

Oneness

Separateness

Self

rarely -less

Positive aloneness

Where is the empathy

there

really

Self-reliance is different

Striving for oneness

may be wrong

after all

It may be asocial

and the result

of one God

Gods and Goddesses

speak in more than

one tongue

one command

one blessing

one curse

Community

of selves

of souls

One self

to one soul

Come on

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Steven Wilson - Self

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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Comments (2)

  • shanmuga priya7 days ago

    It's a thoughtful exploration of the complex nature of selfhood.

  • I know a few people who could really benefit by reading this. Excellently written.

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