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SELF-AWARE Spiral

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By KomalPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read

Knowing

Drowning

Still, I ask: is help my raft?

Seeing

Bleeding

This awareness, my own craft.

Answers whisper

In hollow tones,

A mirror sharp,

A world alone.

Hating

Fearing

The knowledge burns so loud.

Breaking

Taking

My pride beneath its shroud.

Where to go

When truth is weight?

Who to trust

With this debate?

Self-aware,

But not alive,

A maze of me

Where shadows thrive.

Help? Perhaps.

A voice or hand.

Yet here I stand—

And still I drown.

Mental HealthStream of Consciousnesssad poetry

About the Creator

Komal

I write poems and stories that hit the feels.

When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.

𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋

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    Written by Komal