Seeking Radiance in the Gloom
- The Black-Eyed Seeker of Light
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The night gave me a pair of black eyes
A shroud of darkness to conceal the light
Yet in this veil, a hidden gift I prize
A chance to seek what shines beyond my sight
These ebony orbs, a canvas for the moon
Reflect the world in monochrome sublime
The colors of the day become a rune
A code to decipher, if I take the time
I use this gift the night has so bestowed
To pierce the shadows, find the glimmers true
For in the dark, the brightest stars explode
Illuminating paths I must pursue
The night enfolds me in its sable cloak
But through these eyes, I find a guiding glow
The world transformed, its mysteries evoke
A sense of wonder that I long to know
I wander through the inky, velvet skies
My steps ignited by the stars above
The night has granted me this precious prize
These black-shrouded eyes to seek the light I love
In this domain of midnight's ebony reign
I cultivate a vision sharp and keen
The darkest depths cannot my sight restrain
For I have learned to find the light within
So let the night enfold me, wrap me tight
For in this veil, I'll seek the radiant truth
These black-rimmed eyes will guide me to the light
Revealing wonders beyond the reach of youth
The night has gifted me this special sight
And I will use it to transcend the gloom
For in the dark, the brightest stars ignite
And I will follow them until I find my home
About the Creator
Dawnxisoul393art
Couple from HK. Dr. Daniel K Lam has got his degrees in Anglia Ruskin University, Cambridge(ARU has its origins in the Cambridge School of Art, which was opened in 1858 by John Ruskin), Doris H Lam has graduated from GFAA with MFA degree.
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