scratches in my mind - from apathy to dystrophy
Another introspective, inspirational, thought-provoking senryu-duo for my series!
a-path-y of mind
if unchallenged, can lead to
a-trophy of sense
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Ent-ropy of sense
unless addressed, can lead to
dys-trophy of mind
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: Oh, how happy I was when all those words had three syllables! This is another entry into my ongoing "scratches in my mind" series of senryu.
I love that the title's first part plays into the poem's themes in addition to just representing the series!
Here is the previous one in the series:
Here are some other things:
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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