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Scent from the Window

A memory.

By Kevin McLaughlinPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2024
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They say the sense of smell evokes the strongest memories,

Powerful enough to transport you back in time,

To a time when you were young, innocent, and free,

Back to green summer days with blue, cloudless skies.

When you ran and jumped, chasing rabbits in the field,

Climbing too high in trees, trying to catch the wind in a jar,

Scraped knees and tears, tended with caring words and loving hands,

Your biggest worry was making it home before dark.

Now, so many years later, you hesitate,

Hand held inches from the door.

A gentle breeze passes through the window,

Carrying the scents of warm apples, nutmeg, and cinnamon.

You knock.

The door opens.

A familiar face smiles gently beyond the door.

“Would you like to come in? I’ve got fresh apple pie, your favorite.”

You smile back.

“Yes, Grandma, I’d love to.”

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Kevin McLaughlin

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  • Ameer Bibi30 days ago

    Congratulations for top story 🎉 very beautifully describes the love or affection with near ones

  • Sian N. Cluttonabout a month ago

    Beautiful. What a homely piece.

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a month ago

    I have transported many times ❤️. Congratulations

  • The Best Trendabout a month ago

    A good article.

  • Margaret Brennanabout a month ago

    OMG, I miss my grandmother's apple pies. you brought back some really good memories.

  • ROCK about a month ago

    Hello! Charming and poignant in it's simplicity; congratulations on Top Story. I also subscribed:)

  • Anna about a month ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a month ago

    Grandmas are special ! Love your story !

  • Hannah Mooreabout a month ago

    It's a powerful thing, smell.

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    😘🥰U are smart to evoke memory with scent

  • Joe Pattersonabout a month ago

    I identify with this completely.

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