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Saturn’s hatred for the Birth of Venus

Acrostic based on my love for the paintings for the Birth of Venus

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Birth of Venus(not my art)

essence of dampening destruction in dewy

capsules of space, her veins of gravitons

lips bruised as a star starts to break

inside a black hole, black eye

punched by a white light of Seraphim Justice

Sated, Saturn returns in a dark corner, hating

Every single brushstroke of Venus’ Birth, strives to close her out in an angry expression, eclipse that makes Venus cry

Acrosticsad poetry

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

Fanfic account

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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    Written by Melissa Ingoldsby