Sainted Sinners
Starting Sin's Symbolically Saturated Story
Started Saintly. Sanctified Skin. Simple...
Single -Separated side- Spouses.
Satisfied. Safe. Sheltered.
Single strict statement: Solely Superior shall see should/shouldn't scale. Spouses shouldn't snack so spouses shant see should/shouldn't still.
Strange serpent slithered slowly... sneaking... Saying something strange, somewhat sensible, speaking: Seeing superficial superiority somewhat self-seeking. Supervisor/servants so similar. Spouses should say should/shouldn't. Scrutinizing...
Suspicion seeding...
Snake suggests snacking. Small smackeral...
Start savoring - SOUR! Sinner.
Spouses share snack- Sinners!
Sudden sight! Stressed spirits. Shouldn't....shouldn't.... Sexual skin- shame! Seeking shade. "Shhhhhh..."
Seen!
Screaming "Sorry!" Shamed. Separated. Sinners.
Sin's symptoms: Struggle, separation, suffering, starvation.
Still...
Someday- some sacred Son shall strike serpent. Salvation!
Suddenly...
Saintly! Sanctified sin, sanctified skin. Simple.
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