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Round and Round

Negative spaces

By Julie LacksonenPublished 25 days ago • Updated 24 days ago • 1 min read

Round and round we go,

Barely scratching the surface of

What could be a deep relationship.

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How are you?

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I'm fine. You?

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Fine.

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What do you want to eat?

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I don't know. What do you want?

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Whatever.

*

Round and round we go.

Conversations empty at the core.

Meaningful details left out.

*

What are you doing?

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Nothing much.

What do you want to do?

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I don't know. What about you?

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Maybe we can watch something.

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Like what?

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I don't care.

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Whatever.

*

Will you fill in some blanks?

Will I? Must I?

Do we have it in ourselves to flesh out

Otherwise dull moments?

Or are we destined to go...

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Julie Lacksonen

I'm a soon-to-be retired music educator. This is my 40th and final year at the same school. I enjoy writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.

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    Written by Julie Lacksonen